Saturday, July 5, 2014

Haiku v.7/5/14

It has been 4 years

The greatest gift to treasure

Way past her bedtime

All in all, we are ego

The words were somewhat inspiring, a Target canvas a way from being hung on a mid-twenty year old girl's wall.

His inner critic immediately went on the defense, pointing out that the words reminded him of a horoscope: vague, and universally applicable...nothing daring or slightly risky.  Easy platitudes, he thought.

One had to admire her for putting her thoughts on display.  Thoughts that read just like his did, when he put them on display, in his mid-twenties.   I